Warrior Princess

Wow, thanks everyone! I'm glad you liked it, thanks for making it a featured work! :D

Beware of the darkness, they constantly say; Filter emotion, and fling it away. A doctrine of silence, a blindfold of peace, They block out the world, denying release. Encircled by ...

Ello, poppet. Review anything of mine you like, just PLEASE review something! (Preferably one of my newer works.) I'm desperate for feedback, and of course yours is very highly valued. ...

OMG!!! This is prettiful!!!! lol well I like this and I don't feel like nitpicking so you're off the hook this time. ;) It paints a lovely picture in my ...

I first met him on a moonlit night, When he found me in the crowd, And sat beside me. He smiled-- A smile so wicked, yet so kind-- And kissed ...

Oh my, bravo! I thought the first draft was good, but this is infinitely better. It's rather short, but then it's sweet too, so I really can't complain. I like ...

Well I see I'm a latecomer to this forum, which I've found very thought-provoking. (Where do adults get this idea that all teenagers think about is food and the opposite ...

I liked this poem a lot, the rhyme actually works, which seems to be a rare thing in most poetry, unfortunately. The only problem I noticed is that at times ...

First one to review!! Oh yeah baby!! :D You never cease to amaze me. Your poetry style is so simple yet so descriptive, sort of like Robert Frost. I love ...

Oh my gosh!! This is wonderful, darling; absolutely wonderful! (How is it that all your stuff seems to fall into that category???) Wow, I really can't find anything wrong with ...

The full gravity of the situation doesn't hit me when the newspaper runs the story of how I stopped the school shooting. It doesn't hit me when I see myself ...

It all started with Thomas and April. They went out about a year ago, then broke up. But she never really got over him. Thomas is Brad's best friend. Brad ...

Life is lovely, life is fleeting, fraught with joy and fear and pain; My laughter was my sunlight and my tears the falling rain. I learned this all too quickly, ...

This was good; not spectacular perhaps, but good. The topic is fairly common, especially in poems written by teens, but every now and then someone will come along, take a ...

Oh, oh, oh oh! I know who the beautiful girl in the sky is! She's a rainbow!! (Please tell me I'm right, because otherwise I will have just made a ...